1. The Pitch:
https://youtu.be/3CwtUSBhJlg
2. The most important feedback I received was that someone liked how I was trying to differentiate my app from the main stream apps (i.e. Facebook, Twitter, Tumbler, etc...). More specifically, excluding the ability to comment in the app. Commenting is a great form of free expression, however the point of this app isn't to hear any one person's opinion on an event, but rather to be inform them and make it an easier (more educated) decision about their future plans. Sadly there were little (if any) criticisms to my pitch, so it's hard for me to know just what to improve and exclude entirely.
3. The most important improvement I've added to the idea, is that its features need to be more efficient and more accessible than the current competitors. If I can make the information a person needs organized and if they can find it within 3 or 4 clicks, I think my app has a real chance of meeting the mass' interests.
Hey James! I really enjoyed your introduction and elevator pitch as a whole. I found it quite comical and I applaud you for thinking outside the box. I think that your app has a shot as long as you do exactly what you mentioned in your post. I think this app will only take off if it is extremely convenient to use and it seems as if you also agree. I think you could elaborate a little more on the app itself and how it will be set up. I understand the idea but not the full product. Good job and check out my pitch http://cambent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html
ReplyDeleteHey! I really enjoyed your elevator pitch, I thought it was awesome! Also, I think its great how positively people responded to your first pitch, which leaves little room for improvement! If only mine could have gone like that. Also, I liked your idea itself, and I think if you can really fine tune the app it will have a real shot at becoming something popular. You should check out my pitch on my blog! http://principlesofent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteVery well done! The pitch was clear and to the point, and you had a good use of your hands, good fluctuation of your voice and it was just very entertaining. I like the app idea, there really needs to be a database of events around the area. If you get a chance, check out my blog: http://felpar66.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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